normasm August 5, 2015 Share August 5, 2015 HAIKU: 100 No hero this time - What has been taken is gone - Help me work the case 7 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1389678
Bookish Jen August 5, 2015 Share August 5, 2015 HAIKU: L.D.S.K A solid profile He doesn't expect the gun I aim for his leg I want this embroidered on a pillow. 4 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1389733
Cobalt Stargazer August 5, 2015 Share August 5, 2015 (edited) Haiku: Profiler, Profiled Innocence stolen Pious monster uncovered Hero with a badge Edited August 6, 2015 by Cobalt Stargazer 5 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1390078
JMO August 5, 2015 Share August 5, 2015 All I can say is: Amazing talent Pouring through PTV Please hire them stat, EM! 7 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1390202
Droogie August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 THIS IS THE GREATEST THREAD EVER. 4 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1390279
Old Dog August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Haiku: The Last Word Hiding in newsprint Red lipstick in leafy woods Two sides of evil. 5 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1391109
Cobalt Stargazer August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Haiku: Demonology Standing in the snow Mourning for love's labors lost My nose starts to bleed Haiku: True Night Madness freshly born One cold night in an alley I become revenge 5 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1391427
JMO August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 (edited) Okay, here's my challenge to all of you great haiku writers now: Post your haiku, let's see if we can figure out which episode it's for. First one's a 'gimme': Callous beauty, wounded soul Sorrow cleansed In flood of elephant's tears. Edited August 6, 2015 by JustMyOpinion 1 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1391515
normasm August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Elephant's Memory, of course! Like it... Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1391750
normasm August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 (edited) Knife cuts flesh and hair I know I should not want this Knife knife knifeknifeknife Edited August 6, 2015 by normasm 1 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1391772
JMO August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Sex, Birth and Death ? 1 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1391785
Old Dog August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Innocence taken. A destroyed doll mirrors life Found.Forever changed. 2 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1391893
Droogie August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Uncanny Valley! Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1391938
Old Dog August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 No sorry Droogs. Think of another one with a doll in it.. Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1391984
JMO August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Hmmm...I was thinking of Uncanny Valley too. Seven Seconds? Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392069
Cobalt Stargazer August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 The Lesson? Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392091
Old Dog August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Hmmm...I was thinking of Uncanny Valley too. Seven Seconds? Yes it is supposed to be Seven Seconds. It must be bad to be a struggle to be guessed! Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392099
JMO August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Yes it is supposed to be Seven Seconds. It must be bad to be a struggle to be guessed! I don't think any of these are bad---much the contrary, in fact. I'm very impressed with what everyone has produced, because I think haiku is probably the hardest thing to write. I've got a friend who has published volumes of short stories and poetry, and has now gotten into haiku. It can take him a full week to come up with just the right line! I don't have the discipline (and don't like to count), so it's not something I'll ever be good at. But I love what the rest of you have come up with. I will have to limit my attempts, because I'm in the middle of a more wordy enterprise. But I enjoy reading yours! Please keep them coming. 3 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392143
Old Dog August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 No-one believes me Hope lost, found and lost for some Scattered in ashes. Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392176
normasm August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Yes, JMO, Sex, Birth and Death! And please, keep going with your "more wordy enterprise", which I am enjoying hell out of... Old Dog, Elephant's Memory? 2 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392209
Old Dog August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 No sorry Normasm. Think ashes. Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392243
normasm August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 That's what I was trying to do. Oh! Oh! Moseley Lane!!!! Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392245
Old Dog August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Yes! I thought I was getting too obscure with these. I blame you - I keep messing about with words instead of doing what I should be doing! 1 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392253
normasm August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 No, Old Dog, it's just that these are twice as hard without the title giveaway. I blame JMO! 2 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392264
Droogie August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 No sorry Droogs. Think of another one with a doll in it.. Well, poop. I was so sure about it. 1 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392283
JMO August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Yes! I thought I was getting too obscure with these. I blame you - I keep messing about with words instead of doing what I should be doing! No, Old Dog, it's just that these are twice as hard without the title giveaway. I blame JMO Well, since JMO has backed out of all but the guessing phase, feel free to go back to the original method. Although I was enjoying the guessing..... 1 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392293
Old Dog August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Well, since JMO has backed out of all but the guessing phase, feel free to go back to the original method. Although I was enjoying the guessing..... No JMO, it is fun to guess - it just makes me worry about being too obscure. There's no stopping me now! Constellations bleed Transcending mortality The madness persists. 2 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392299
Bookish Jen August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 All I can say is: Amazing talent Pouring through PTV Please hire them stat, EM! This needs to be put on a banner and flown over the CM lot. 2 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392359
normasm August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Old Dog, Angel Maker? 1 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392384
Old Dog August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Yay Normasm! 1 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392387
normasm August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 An easy one: You hear me calling Do battle with Man's Sickness It's eating your soul Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392390
Old Dog August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 An easy one: You hear me calling Do battle with Man's Sickness It's eating your soul That's not so easy! It could be Mr Scratch. It could be Jones. Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392438
normasm August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Oh, I see what you're saying, but it's neither.... think about the last line.... Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392466
Old Dog August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Not Lucky? Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392473
normasm August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 (edited) Nope. It's someone talking to Reid. (Gosh, I really suck at this) Edited August 6, 2015 by normasm Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392508
Old Dog August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Gosh I feel really dumb! How about Zugswang? Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392520
JMO August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 So, the thing I'm learning from this, even when we don't get it right, is not about the writer of the haiku. it's about the writers of the actual show. There has to be some consistency there, or we wouldn't be able to apply the same haiku to more than one episode. Or, does that mean a lack of creativity? Oh, dear..... 1 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392541
Old Dog August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 (edited) So, the thing I'm learning from this, even when we don't get it right, is not about the writer of the haiku. it's about the writers of the actual show. There has to be some consistency there, or we wouldn't be able to apply the same haiku to more than one episode. Or, does that mean a lack of creativity? Oh, dear..... In my case I fear it's more because I am a rubbish novice haiku writer and I am pants at puzzles in solving others' clever ones! Edited August 6, 2015 by Old Dog 1 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392548
JMO August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 (edited) In my case I fear it's because I am a rubbish novice haiku writer and I am pants at puzzles in solving others' clever ones! "Pants at puzzles"----love it! It's not a US idiom, but I am absolutely going to find a way to use it somewhere!! Maybe Emily has acquired a little 'UK-speak'.... Edited August 6, 2015 by JustMyOpinion 2 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392556
normasm August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Let me try again... Julio to Reid in Corazon You hear me callingDo battle with Man's SicknessIt's eating your soul 1 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392557
Old Dog August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Let me try again... Julio to Reid in Corazon You hear me calling Do battle with Man's Sickness It's eating your soul Am I dumb or what! Knocks head against wall!! Of course it is! "Pants at puzzles"----love it! It's not a US idiom, but I am absolutely going to find a way to use it somewhere!! Maybe Emily has acquired a little 'UK-speak'.... Is that really not a saying over there! Common parlance here - no doubt Emily will have heard it after time in London. 2 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392566
normasm August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Pants at Puzzles sounds like a new song for Spencer, Hold My Earrings!! 2 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392723
Cobalt Stargazer August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Bloodied and battered Wronged with only one who cares Hey, Elle, is that you? 1 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392793
normasm August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 CoStar, I think you broked mah brain Aftermath? Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392826
Cobalt Stargazer August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Close, sort of, but no. Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392851
Bookish Jen August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 THIS IS THE GREATEST THREAD EVER. Isn't it? I just love how clever and creativity my PTV CM Besties are. We should put the haikus, the song titles we have for Spencer, Hold My Earrings, amongst other delights found in this thread and put them in a scrapbook for the CM cast. I bet they'd get a kick out of it. 2 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1392912
normasm August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 DOH! CoStar, I so want to get it, but I fail... Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1393026
JMO August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 I'm stuck on this one, CoStar. Though I know it will be obvious, with hindsight. Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1393149
Cobalt Stargazer August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 Bloodied and battered Wronged with only one who cares Hey, Elle, is that you? This one is for Jones. Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1393222
normasm August 6, 2015 Share August 6, 2015 (edited) Brother, I love you Go to Mother, be at peace I'm at the door, whole Edited August 7, 2015 by normasm 1 Link to comment https://forums.primetimer.com/topic/3451-the-bullpen/page/29/#findComment-1393289
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