S1.E8: California Jeanin'

[statsgirl]

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As Jean's birthday approaches, Jackie and Freddie compete over who is going to get her the best gift; Jean's best friend surprises her in Los Angeles but their time spent celebrating quickly takes a turn.

 

[shapeshifter]

I watched this on Hulu.
The writing/editing seems to be the main problem.
As with most of anything I ever write, most of the first part of the episode needed to cut, and then the end needed to be restated at the beginning. 
Dear Show: I'm retired and already working for free. Just sayin'.