I have to say I am utterly delighted with this show.
It has proven to me beyond a shadow of a doubt that any low-level incompetent drivel I write myself can actually pass for, at the very least, a single series TV show, and still be infinitely more comprehensible!
Maggie had a complete personality change for no apparent reason. It would seem Roman did also. As did the (now ghost form) of Father Dan who is now luring children away????
Whaaaaat???
Maggie went from "Save my Dad at all costs" to "This town belongs to us" to "Meh? Let's steal a body and leave the town behind" in a matter of minutes.
Roman went from "saviour with weird blue-white power eyes thing" that scares ghosts away to "totally self-oriented, don't worry what Maggie looks like on the outside body-snatcher"
Next episode. Everyone wakes up and it was all a dream. But was it, because inter-dimensional aliens are visiting and have them all in a mind-warping dream-reality device that interlinks all their minds, only it's actually Maggie having just one dream because she's high on drugs given to her at a poker game, but actually it's a premonition of inter-dimensional aliens that are really cats from planet Meow and oops my random sentence generator just broke.
I recommend:
Plot and Structure: Techniques and Exercises for Crafting a Plot - No, seriously, it does actually need a plot. Really? YES REALLY.
Revision and Self-Editing: Techniques for Transforming Your First Draft into something almost worthy of the dustbin. Yes, Dustbin. Almost Worthy Of.
Showing AND Telling: Hell, either of these would be preferable. Please show. Or tell.. Please?